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By Helayne Lightstone, The Hospital of Central Connecticut
People are busy, and want quick take-aways from what they read. This is especially evident now that folks text and twit in an evolving, abbreviated language. Marketing communicators may not be able to use emoticons or phrases like “C U later” in their work. But the effectiveness of tight writing cannot be overestimated, whether in a press release, web post, or annual report, where space is also an issue. Hope these tip and tricks help.
1. Less is more.
Overstatement dilutes your message. Example of a lede: The elementary school Michelle attends is in a terrible state of physical disrepair, with many deteriorating red bricks on the front and sides of the building, along with ceilings tiles that have large rings of brown water stains.
Tightened: Michelle's school is marred by crumbling bricks and stained ceiling tiles.
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